Decent work!
Well, its a very ambientish DnB. Amazing synth work and the drums are great. Voices are nicely recorded and coudl be heard clearly. Those are a nice touch btw. Ncie poem at the beginning too. Bass however, is sadly lacking. There's only one bass and its a bit repetitive. Its also too damn short. However, given the short amount of time you had, i wont reduce ur points too much for that.
Darklight17
P.S This is your judging review from NGADM Round 1. I posted it for ya just cos its always nice to have more reviews.