Echo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[De -TEST- icus 1]

Damn! That's a big window!

Well, the window was way too big, as u may have noticed in the title... The huge window led to blurry outlines, blurry otulines led to nigh on impossible to make out plot and that led to ur six.

From what i understood throughout, u have good concept for a story and if u coudl develop it it'd be great. What u definetely need to do is reduce the window size as that was what reduced most of ur pts.

Graphics were a bit too plain too . A background could help in this part byt adding depth to the animation.

However, this is an idea that could easily be developed and i believe that it'd go far if it was. Keep it up man!

Darklight17
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[Don't cry anon]

NIce work!

this a so good for a short animation. Its puts through a meaning and a feeling in a few seconds. Its good adn it defintely looks like you put a lot of work into it. seven hours ? ouch...

Animation was very smooth and graphics were good too. What u could include was a background in some scenes. maybe a sun setting in the end, with the word forever written on it? Dunno, just an idea,

Audio was clear and could be understood well. The subtitles definetely helped and the meaning of the song was brilliantly prtrayed throughout. NIce work on this part...

All in all, its a good piece of flash. Well thought out and well put together. Nice work dude...

Darklight17
-Review Request Club-

[How Not To Make A Comic]

lol...lmao...

lol. This is great. Short and sweet as i suppose its called.

Its a great concept adna well animated idea. Well portrayed thoughts and graphics are smooth and nice too.

Laughed a lot at the end and it drew more then a few chuckles throughout. Nice work.

The voice acting was awesome and it fit in perfectly with the animation. Nice work dude...

Darklight17
-Review Request Club-

Assios responds:

Thanks, glad you laughed! :D

[The Morph!]

Nice work...

Its a well thought out piece. The concept is very original and you portrayed it quite well. Lines could've been a bit more detailed but graphics (although black and white) were good too.

Animation was pretty smooth and it looks like u put in a decent effort to make it like this.

The ending is a bit abrupt, maybe you could make the lines slowly build up the word, The MORPH adn add some hidden details or something. Dunno, just an idea.

Audio was great too, and it blended in well with the animation.

Overall, its a good decent effort. Keep it up...

Darklight17
-Review Request Club-

cheesebizkit responds:

hey thanks for the comments

[TBA- Time Trial #2]

Okay, I guess...

=Animation/Graphics=

This section was a pretty good job throughout, with animation being basically smooth throughout and without any awful skips.

Graphics weren't bad either and were pretty well thought out over the whole movie. Backgrounds and detailed images provided good depth too.

=Story/Concept=

The idea was pretty original and you managed to portray it quite well. I especiially liked the part where the boy gave his mom a present by joining the army cos its realistic and funny at the same time.

You layed out the plot for the thing quite well, portraying ideas and variety was good too.

One thing that bothered me however were those real life movies as they didn't really fit in with the main idea of the movie setting it a bit off. But still, not a bad job...

=Audio=

Audio could've been clearer in some parts but still, it was good enough for me to understand what was happening. So it's good i guess...

=Overall=

Not a bad job. Animation was good, as was the original concept. maybe you could work more on Audio adn removing thsoe real videos.

keep it up

Darklight17
-Review Request Club-

[The Breakfast]

Hmm...I don't get it....

Exactly what is this about??? I don't see breakfast in any part...that's odd seeing as its the name of the title....

=Animation=

This was probably the only decent thing you did throughout and there wasn't much of it. The dolphin contrasted too much with the stickmen, which, although animated, skipped quite a bit through out...

The stickmena re good and have acceptable graphichs, but u need a background...

=Stroy/Concept=

Not a bad idea. Although i still haven't figured out what its about :S

If u want to do random, which may be funny in some cases, you still have to explain some parts. if u don't it makes the whole thing stupid and boring...

I won't comment on concept as i still don't have an idea what this is about....

=Audio=

I totall agree with Fro on this one. This audio is an insult to the ear drum. Whoever likes this audio needs a couple of operations...both in the ear and the cerebrum (part of brain which controls thoughts i think...)

=Overall=

Its not worth any mroe then two. Sry, i normally give more on flash as i don't really understand these things but i'ma fraid i understand that the only thing that this deserves is only a couple of stars. You need to improve...

Darklight17
-Review Request Club-

[LF2:The Alliance Ch.3]

Woah! Nice!

Cool work man. It really encouraged me to go back and see all the others...

{Animation/Graphics}

Not much to complain in terms of graphics. The background, although always the same, provided enough depth to make the whole thing even more real and even better.

Animation was quite smooth and transitions in most parts were amazing. The battle was great, although the bats could have used a couple of different moves. The archers were quite good too. Great job in this. I'd better get to work seeing all your others... ;)

{Story/Concept}

its a sequel so it cant be completely original, but a very good job nonetheless. Liked the twist at the end with the archers coming in and Bat getting poisined. Nice. Leaves the viewer baying for more. Awesome work.

{Audio]

the only thing that got you a nine. The rest was honestly amazing, but u really need some help with the voice acting. The voices were pretty low and monotone in most cases. Like Coop83 said. Either get a new mike or find some help...

{Overall}

A brilliant piece of work. U got the nine only because of the audio. improve that and u'll be getting 10s alround. I still gave you a five though ;)

Keep it up. Please bring out the next one soon, can't wait...

Darklight17
-Review Request Club-

[A Grand Ship]

Short, to the point and great!

{Animation/graphics}

Similar to graphics in Southpark but not quite as crisp and sharp. The background could've been more varied, providing some additional depth to the story.

Animation was quite smooth although the mouth movement didn't exactly match with the sound. Lip sing was a bit off. Overall not a bad job on this term. Nice job on the bunny btw. Lol.

{Story/Concept}

A very original concept. Lmao at the end. Very funny storyline. great jobn in terms of originality and story. One thing i liked most was the smooth transition of both voices and animations when the old pirate guy started to suggest names rapidly. good job.

{Audio}

The voice rang was great. good job to Rockmonix for the voice acting a very well thought out piece. nice work.

{Overall}

Great work on the whole thing. Good graphcis, great stroyline, a funny script and great voice acting got you the ten you deserve. Nice work. :)

Darklight17
-Review Request Club-

Sgtkillstuff responds:

Thank you. Rockmonix is a great voice actor and script writer, I had a lot of fun working with him. I'm glad you liked it.