Much better...
...Then the previous two. This one actually brought out a chuckle and made me smile. It also actually made sense for once...
The plot was pretty predictable, but it was still averagely funny. As usual, you could have expanded the storyline much more, and a longer movie would have resulted in a better plot.
Layout and audio were as usual great and pretty realistic.
Darklight17
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Glad you liked it!
Like the previous...
Like the previous volume, had the potential to be way better, adn with more time, im sure you could have found several different ideas that you could have expanded. As far as the humour, it was average and didnt exactly make complete sense.
Audio and Layout were realistic at least and that sure got ur points up a bit.
Overall, once again, with more work this could shape up to be much better...
Darklight17
=Review Request Club=
Good for a KK movie tho, right?
Hmm...
ok, so not that bad a movie. Im afraid i didnt really apreciate the humour, because the movie was way too short, there were soo many directions that you could have taken. I'd have liked to see how the ghosts reacted , or maybe the food thingies could have done something during the drug addiction.
layout was good however, and the realistic game sounds helped too. It would have been a bit better if the screen had been bigger though.
Overall, not a bad job, but making it longer could work in your favour.
Darklight17
=Review Request Club=
Thank you!
Uh,,,
Im trying to be kind here, but i cant give more than a four. Its only ten seconds for sud's sake.
I dont have anything in particular against heavy metal, i treat it fairly like i treat any other kind of music. However, the quality was a bit low on this one, and i had trouble identifying the words.
The movie was also way too short, even for a collab. There are soooo many ways that u can continue this. Just let the potential flow, ull have something in no time.
Darklight17
=Review Request Club=
Yes it was for a collab thats why is short... and i though that the shouting with the lazer was funny dont know really
Thanks for reviewing
Fantastic...
As with the other episodes, this is amazing, creepy maybe, but definetely amazing. The storyline keeps me caught up and i simply cant look away ocne ive started.
Like haggard i like the fact that u answer certain questions that ud set up before but at the same time give the story another twist and send it spiralling in a new direction. It sure keeps the whole thing interesting and it definetely works at creating a dark and detailed atmosphere.
Overall, nice work once again, keep up the good work.
Darklight17
=Review Request Club=
Yes building atmosphere is super important to a story, I wanted this comic to have a really nightmarish feeling to it.
Thanks,
- Celx
Unbelievably good...
Brilliant work. Sure its not much to look at in terms of graphics and its not too much of a complicated series of animations, but the story sure makes up for it.
Ever since the first episode ive been going through these comics over and over again, cos i just cant let them go. The dark atmosphere uve set up is beyond amazing and the storyline, even though u havent shown too much of it yet, is already fantastic.
The music also helped a lot in setting up the creepy atmoshpere, and it sort of took me to a dark place where the sun never shines and evil is just a way of life.
Overall, fantasic work on bascially every term. Nice work.
Darklight17
=Review Request Club=
I really like the review you left me it made me smile :)
Sincerely,
- Celx
Frankly, i don't really get it...
It does look rushed and u didn't put a lot of work into this. Now, i'm not an expert in how long it takes to make a decent movie but if its the same as audio, u''ll need a lot more of time to make something whihc would pass examination by reviewers.
Graphics, although smooth and well placed, were slightly simple and there wasn't much variety in them. Animation was smooth throughout and ic ant complain but yet again, ti was too simple. IMO, you should've amd the man be reading some newspaper or something instead of just staring off into the middle distance with a dazed expression.
Audio was virtually non existent but when it came, the scream wasn't particularly amazing. I didn't even get a fright as i anticiapted what was gonna happen. If ur gonna makle something like this, Make it more dramatic and interesting so while the user is captivated you can go ahead and scare the soul outta him.
Overall, its not bad, the ending and ideas were rushed and it deserves nothing more then a six really.
Darklight17
=Review Request Club=
Hmm, it takes a much longer time to make a decent flash vid than audio, actually.. And yeah, I agree with you ;)
Thanks!
Nice work...
I won't go into as much detail as supersteph as he pretty much covered everything with his long review (as usual :P). All i'll say is that i liked all of them. You have a lot of potential and if u finished ur ideas u'd go far.
Animation was smooth in pretty much all of them although some slight glitches were present. Graphics were great all round. I enjoyed all the different styles of drawing whihc seemed to blend well with the themes of the short movies.
Audio was pretty decent too and it implemented ur flash well. Overall. You put in a lot of work in making these moveis and i hope u finish them as i'd love to see how each turned out.
Darklight17
=Review Request Club=
Awesome, I appreciate the input. As I've said in other reviews, these will be finished! Thanks again.
Hilarious!
A little bti fo something new is always appreciated, throughout the movie i thought it was gonna be same old same old again but the twist at the end is great. Nice work.
The idea was not amazingly original but the twist at the end sure was. U used smooth aniamtion and colourful graphics whihc could've used some more effort. Sound as in music wasn't paritcularly amazing but it wasn't bad. What i didn't like was the static at the end, i think its because the bass is too deep.
Overall, great concept, great ending. Overall great work!
Darklight17
=Review Request Club=
hm..didn't quite get it...
Its a simple enough story, like CaptainAwesome mentioned. What i didn't get though was the beginning. With the big green thing punching the wall etc. The rest was pretty straightforward.
Animation was pretty smooth but the background was sadly lacking in depth and it needs more work.
Concept wasn't exactly original but u portrayed it well so no points reduced there. Other then the negatives i mentioned, this is a well thought out flash movie and it deserves the eight i gave it.
Darklight17
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